The first few pages of To Bite or Not to Bite were submitted to a professional editor and this is what she said:
"This is excellent writing! ... The story is clear and flows beautifully. The imagery is wonderful, as well as the character development. In just the couple of pages I read, I already have sense of who the main character is. The pace of the story is right where it should be. In the first few pages, I learn that she is half-vampire and has been taken captive by a vampire... she is a loving daughter who takes care of her sickly father at home. Naturally, I want to know more! The reader, at this point, is committed to the story because we have to know how she came to be a captive ... and what about this, Braulio?
"Great job!"
"This is excellent writing! ... The story is clear and flows beautifully. The imagery is wonderful, as well as the character development. In just the couple of pages I read, I already have sense of who the main character is. The pace of the story is right where it should be. In the first few pages, I learn that she is half-vampire and has been taken captive by a vampire... she is a loving daughter who takes care of her sickly father at home. Naturally, I want to know more! The reader, at this point, is committed to the story because we have to know how she came to be a captive ... and what about this, Braulio?
"Great job!"
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