Here is what Linda F. said about To Bite or Not to Bite: "The pacing was good, and I stayed up late to finish the book (a good sign for me). Awesome book. I can’t wait to read the prequel and the sequel. You will be a best selling author in the near future!"
Jen B. said (about More Fang For Your Buck): "Just read it - awesome. You are so talented!!! Keep sending more!"
This is what Jen B. said about To Bite or Not to Bite: "After page 56 I didn't even get up to pee... I LOVED the book. I read it in one day. Nate was getting pissed that I was ignoring him and neglecting the kids. I think you are an amazing writer and am sooooo impressed with your skills. I loved the way you had me feel the romance and connection with Riley and Damon. I felt it completely... I loved it so much I can't stop thinking about the characters..."
Jyl B. said (about To Bite or Not to Bite): "I loved the book. I think that your idea...was very original and you developed both the characters and the story very well. I am amazed that I know someone that can write a book. I am interested in the characters and curious about what will happen next with them. I would definately read the sequel!!!!!!"
Tuesday, August 19, 2008
Saturday, August 9, 2008
A professional editor said:
The first few pages of To Bite or Not to Bite were submitted to a professional editor and this is what she said:
"This is excellent writing! ... The story is clear and flows beautifully. The imagery is wonderful, as well as the character development. In just the couple of pages I read, I already have sense of who the main character is. The pace of the story is right where it should be. In the first few pages, I learn that she is half-vampire and has been taken captive by a vampire... she is a loving daughter who takes care of her sickly father at home. Naturally, I want to know more! The reader, at this point, is committed to the story because we have to know how she came to be a captive ... and what about this, Braulio?
"Great job!"
"This is excellent writing! ... The story is clear and flows beautifully. The imagery is wonderful, as well as the character development. In just the couple of pages I read, I already have sense of who the main character is. The pace of the story is right where it should be. In the first few pages, I learn that she is half-vampire and has been taken captive by a vampire... she is a loving daughter who takes care of her sickly father at home. Naturally, I want to know more! The reader, at this point, is committed to the story because we have to know how she came to be a captive ... and what about this, Braulio?
"Great job!"
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