Tuesday, August 19, 2008

Book Reviews

Here is what Linda F. said about To Bite or Not to Bite: "The pacing was good, and I stayed up late to finish the book (a good sign for me). Awesome book. I can’t wait to read the prequel and the sequel. You will be a best selling author in the near future!"

Jen B. said (about More Fang For Your Buck): "Just read it - awesome. You are so talented!!! Keep sending more!"

This is what Jen B. said about To Bite or Not to Bite: "After page 56 I didn't even get up to pee... I LOVED the book. I read it in one day. Nate was getting pissed that I was ignoring him and neglecting the kids. I think you are an amazing writer and am sooooo impressed with your skills. I loved the way you had me feel the romance and connection with Riley and Damon. I felt it completely... I loved it so much I can't stop thinking about the characters..."

Jyl B. said (about To Bite or Not to Bite): "I loved the book. I think that your idea...was very original and you developed both the characters and the story very well. I am amazed that I know someone that can write a book. I am interested in the characters and curious about what will happen next with them. I would definately read the sequel!!!!!!"

Saturday, August 9, 2008

A professional editor said:

The first few pages of To Bite or Not to Bite were submitted to a professional editor and this is what she said:

"This is excellent writing! ... The story is clear and flows beautifully. The imagery is wonderful, as well as the character development. In just the couple of pages I read, I already have sense of who the main character is. The pace of the story is right where it should be. In the first few pages, I learn that she is half-vampire and has been taken captive by a vampire... she is a loving daughter who takes care of her sickly father at home. Naturally, I want to know more! The reader, at this point, is committed to the story because we have to know how she came to be a captive ... and what about this, Braulio?

"Great job!"